We have been sharing some amazing character writing that we did with Mrs Piters. Some examples will follow. Please comment and explain 1 thing that you remember that really has improved your character writing.
I think the charcter writing was fun.the thing that has improved my charactor writing was when mrs peiters said to not use she and her or him alot you use the starting word and add ing or ed. Rebecca
Hi my name is Ruth and i think that it was fun when mrs Piters came in.I think that my writing has gottin better because mrs Piters said not to make charactor writing to long and i now have more describing words
hi it's Sade and I think character writing was fun.I liked it when we got told to put "I remember it as if it were yesterday" as the first line in our Miss Honey and Miss trunchbull writting.I think the bit the helped me the best was when she said that good character writting has similies and metotphors but not to use them to much.
Hi this is Jessa and 1 thing i learned when Mrs Piters was in our class in writing was to make it a discipsion not a story. The peace of writing i enjoyed was writhing about Matilda.
Hi it's caelin and i tnik the charater writing has been fun.My favourite desription we wrote was eating Pizza and miss trunchball. i think what helped me the most was when she mrs piters said to make it short and not like a story.Also when she said to use similes and metaphors but not too much.
Hi its Teagan,when Mrs Piters came in and we did character writing the one thing that she helped me improve my chracater writing with was making shore it didnt turn out to be a story.I love character writing.
Hi when Mrs Piters is a really good charter writer she gave really great ideas and she always makes good coments about your writing (Mrs Piters is cool!!) Georgia
Hay it's Jack.G the character writing was really fun i think the best thing that helped me was probably that Mrs Piters wrote down before we started where everything goes and told us a bit about the story.
The best part about Mrs Piters teaching us will be that she will read us the book but if we already know it she will probily read the book to us agin if it is our class.
Mrs piters is so kind and jeaners that when you are stuck on a word in a spelling test mrs piters will say sound it out or give it another try and if your luckey she will help you with the word that you are stuck on.
Hi this is Jess ass you probably already know um i liked it when Mrs Piters came into our cvlass and taught us how to do a good piece of character writing she helped me alot espesly when she put some new sentences in my writing so it made my writing more descriptive. my favourite writing with her was when we wrote about our character walking on a stage or something i did a super model walking on a cat-walk.
Savvy 7 you are amazing at reflecting on what you have learnt. You are so lucky to have had a real expert teach you who is passionate about helping children become better writers. These comments will certainly help us collect some more words for www ! spot the spelling mistake!!
hit there it is andrew,and i absoulotley love making descriptive character writing with mrs piters. my favourite one was the matilda- not the rohal dohl one though.
hi mrs piters this is holly i love witing character witing with you but the most thing i like about it iswhen you are reading a story we are going to do character witing about you always act out or make funny voices when you are reading it out so thank you for coming in to teach us about it.-holly
I think the charcter writing was fun.the thing that has improved my charactor writing was when mrs peiters said to not use she and her or him alot you use the starting word and add ing or ed.
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Hi my name is Ruth and i think that it was fun when mrs Piters came in.I think that my writing has gottin better because mrs Piters said not to make charactor writing to long and i now have more describing words
ReplyDeletehi it's Sade and I think character writing was fun.I liked it when we got told to put "I remember it as if it were yesterday" as the first line in our Miss Honey and Miss trunchbull writting.I think the bit the helped me the best was when she said that good character writting has similies and metotphors but not to use them to much.
ReplyDeleteHi this is Jessa and 1 thing i learned when Mrs Piters was in our class in writing was to make it a discipsion not a story. The peace of writing i enjoyed was writhing about Matilda.
ReplyDeleteHi it's caelin and i tnik the charater writing has been fun.My favourite desription we wrote was eating Pizza and miss trunchball. i think what helped me the most was when she mrs piters said to make it short and not like a story.Also when she said to use similes and metaphors but not too much.
ReplyDeletehi its taana i think that mrs piters has been a big help with our charter writing because she tells us what to do and she has good ideas
ReplyDeleteHi its Teagan,when Mrs Piters came in and we did character writing the one thing that she helped me improve my chracater writing with was making shore it didnt turn out to be a story.I love character writing.
ReplyDeleteHi when Mrs Piters is a really good charter writer she gave really great ideas and she always makes good coments about your writing (Mrs Piters is cool!!)
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Hay it's Jack.G the character writing was really fun i think the best thing that helped me was probably that Mrs Piters wrote down before we started where everything goes and told us a bit about the story.
ReplyDeletei like doing the matilda writing from zeke
ReplyDeleteThing one thing that helped me was that Mrs Piters acted out the charcter and did the tone she thought was the charters and the sentence she says.
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hi it charlie the one thing that`s helping me is Mrs piters reading charter writing and discribing the character.
ReplyDeleteMrs piters said instead of using said that we could use other words like shouted or laughed etc
ReplyDeleteThe best part about Mrs Piters teaching us will be that she will read us the book but if we already know it she will probily read the book to us agin if it is our class.
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mrs piters stoped so we could hear what people siad there iders so we could boro one Gregory
ReplyDeleteThis character writing was amazing! So fun! Mrs Piters is awesome when it comes to writing. Kealan
ReplyDeleteMrs piters is so kind and jeaners that when you are stuck on a word in a spelling test mrs piters will say sound it out or give it another try and if your luckey she will help you with the word that you are stuck on.
ReplyDeleteHi this is Jess ass you probably already know um i liked it when Mrs Piters came into our cvlass and taught us how to do a good piece of character writing she helped me alot espesly when she put some new sentences in my writing so it made my writing more descriptive. my favourite writing with her was when we wrote about our character walking on a stage or something i did a super model walking on a
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Savvy 7 you are amazing at reflecting on what you have learnt. You are so lucky to have had a real expert teach you who is passionate about helping children become better writers. These comments will certainly help us collect some more words for www ! spot the spelling mistake!!
ReplyDeleteGreat Writing Savvy 7!
hit there it is andrew,and i absoulotley love making descriptive character writing with mrs piters. my favourite one was the matilda- not the rohal dohl one though.
ReplyDeletei love character writing i love writing about people that are in the books that i read.-Emily
ReplyDeletehi mrs piters this is holly i love witing character witing with you but the most thing i like about it iswhen you are reading a story we are going to do character witing about you always act out or make funny voices when you are reading it out so thank you for coming in to teach us about it.-holly
ReplyDeleteHi, Kirsty here.... I like character writing but to me... it's not really that great. Because it's hard to think of things before they come to mind!
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